Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Mind Colors

Endeavor, Lino Tagliapietra, Columbus Museum of Art

colorful leeches got bloated
some of them are even sugar-coated
with vibrant reds and happy yellows
funny purples and green that glows
blacks stripes running
and pinks gone a-blushing
rushing, floating this and that
inside my mind while writing tit for tat!
@Poems by WenaVee

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18 comments:

  1. cool love the idea of thinking in colours ....thank you for sharing

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  2. nice poem I enjoyed reading it. "Vibrant reds and happy yellows" loving the descriptive words :)

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  3. Great choice of words, fun and light!

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  4. Wonderful pairing of words with image ... the very first thought that occurred to me when I saw the piece of art was just that - leaches!

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  5. Oh this awesome! I love your take on the prompt

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  6. A mind filled with rainbows? What a colorful thought! Nicely done!

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  7. Really liked the free flowing nature here, the colors just moved the piece. Well done, really enjoyed:)

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  8. Like it! Like it very much! *smile*

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  9. Great rhyme scheme. Very "colorful." :)

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  10. Loved the descriptive words. Nice job!

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  11. ....tit for tat. Cool ending to this mesmerizing tale!

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  12. You sure turned leaches into beauty with your words.

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  13. very very creative, i admire this, thank you, much appreciated, WS

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