...prompted to write
Beautiful, sad, and touching at the same time.
you progress through several emotions in such short space...nice...
it is very beautiful...like a lonesome song, full of longings! loved it :)
I liked the style, slowly engaging the reader into its very essence, a sad grief, a beautiful tale engrossed.Lovely!
Love the progressive use of tense, followed by your third lines in the stanza. Nice uniformity to your smooth poem.
Great emotional ride with this piece, nicely done.
This is an emotional journey... Nicely written.
love your word play.you send me flyingand smiling.