brick wall heart
I opened my heart
hoping that you will see
but instead you flee
are you afraid to find
yourself inside?
so I pile my bricks
higher around me
but no, you never meant to start
to break it apart
oh, the pain of waiting
as I slowly harden.
@wenavee
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This is brilliant,
ReplyDeletelove your entry.
smiles.
I have often found this too when you open yourself up to someone they run away. Great job!
ReplyDeleteso I pile my bricks
ReplyDeletehigher around me
but no, you never meant to start
to break it apart
oh, the pain of waiting
as I slowly harden...
...felt.
amazing poem I feel that way , yet i avoid pain by dreaming that who I love will one day love me back . very well written .
ReplyDelete"I opened my heart
ReplyDeletehoping that you will see
but instead you flee
are you afraid to find
yourself inside?
so I pile my bricks
higher around me
but no, you never meant to start
to break it apart"
Oh quite a powerful image ... I can relate!
I've built many a tower around me, I can tell you! You've captured that essence wonderfully!
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